Photostory rough beginnings

A brief synopsis of my story is that it’s about a lone pilot who miraculously survived when her spaceship crashed on an alien planet only to find that said planet is inhabited by hostile soldiers, demonic creatures, and mechanical monsters. She is desperately trying to survive long enough to be rescued, but in the end she isn’t able to cheat death a second time.

These are the rough images before adding effects or text. Below is the order in which I plan to arrange them for the Photostory, but I would love feedback on what looks like it works or doesn’t work and if any images look like they should be moved around for a better flow.

Thanks.

UPDATE: based on Kevin's comments I took some additional photos to incorporate into this set and rearranged some others. I will be flipping some images horizontally to maintain a consistent perspective, but please let me know what other changes ought to be made.

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